Hi guys and girls the daylies are ready. The revised treatment is here. I am currently drilling out the final script as I wanted to makes sure people understood the plot and trailer. I added dialogue and change some minor bits. Please comment and be constructive so i can brush it up for Storyboard and animatic tomorrow. The Dialogue I want to talk to Jonno on if you don't mind as I enjoy your scripted previously.
Treament on the Feliz 2